tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post7852666533117507633..comments2024-01-05T14:33:06.058-08:00Comments on Song of my life: Wind? Love?Winnie the poohihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11445691463105808647noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-57817828183209359572009-04-10T22:12:00.000-07:002009-04-10T22:12:00.000-07:00Mercy, very well written.Mercy, very well written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-29532465384281645562009-02-19T22:03:00.000-08:002009-02-19T22:03:00.000-08:00winnie, i bow to thy superior imagination and vivi...winnie, i bow to thy superior imagination and vividity of thought. True beauty in ur words. This is your best work to date i feel.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-55203492236745615992009-02-11T14:42:00.000-08:002009-02-11T14:42:00.000-08:00I like the movements of the two flowers.I like the movements of the two flowers.Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02023472067047797430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-18805569825787404252009-02-10T15:57:00.000-08:002009-02-10T15:57:00.000-08:00zoya windmilled fits perfectly!just the name i was...zoya windmilled fits perfectly!<BR/><BR/>just the name i was looking for!Winnie the poohihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11445691463105808647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-56687054036492119072009-02-10T15:41:00.000-08:002009-02-10T15:41:00.000-08:00..enjoyed reading ur poem..my entry for the captio.....enjoyed reading ur poem..my entry for the caption is:-<BR/>'windmilled dreams'..<BR/>(ps- only 'windmilled' sounds better,but i'm somehow sure u won't like it!)..many thanks..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-41193528617540359072009-02-10T11:55:00.000-08:002009-02-10T11:55:00.000-08:00I love the photograph, and the words.How about 'Ki...I love the photograph, and the words.<BR/><BR/>How about 'Kissing Goodbye' for a title?indicaspecieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04082836899942612554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-14637828757259286952009-02-09T12:02:00.000-08:002009-02-09T12:02:00.000-08:00Nice idea tumblewords.. I might do just that :)Nice idea tumblewords.. I might do just that :)Winnie the poohihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11445691463105808647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-16810881680593730292009-02-09T11:20:00.000-08:002009-02-09T11:20:00.000-08:00Thinking - you might want to tighten the poem a bi...Thinking - you might want to tighten the poem a bit and print it on an enlarged picture for a haiga...just a thought.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-5721746748909362312009-02-09T11:19:00.000-08:002009-02-09T11:19:00.000-08:00Lovely movement. I don't think this needs a title ...Lovely movement. I don't think this needs a title - as long as it appears with the photo.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-12928588756136374292009-02-09T05:16:00.000-08:002009-02-09T05:16:00.000-08:00Way creative one !!Way creative one !!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-12754522224680987922009-02-08T23:45:00.000-08:002009-02-08T23:45:00.000-08:00I believe the wind is more a Villain than a Hero.....I believe the wind is more a Villain than a Hero...<BR/>Coz the flowers never know when they meet again even after staying drastically close to each other....<BR/><BR/>SO near yet so farSubhajithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07556370967974993187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-66455472488592553602009-02-08T16:31:00.000-08:002009-02-08T16:31:00.000-08:00Interesting one roswila :DThank you for dropping b...Interesting one roswila :D<BR/><BR/>Thank you for dropping by :)Winnie the poohihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11445691463105808647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-4679544144513885332009-02-08T15:39:00.000-08:002009-02-08T15:39:00.000-08:00Very nice! Title? Does it need one? Shorter poe...Very nice! Title? Does it need one? Shorter poems often do fine without one. But my sense would be to focus on the wind's nature in some way, it's duality, it's two-sidedness. Something like (but this is not an actual suggestion) FLIPSIDES.Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-42136968816549028282009-02-08T15:12:00.000-08:002009-02-08T15:12:00.000-08:00Must be ur name that suggested it :d floreta :DMust be ur name that suggested it :d floreta :DWinnie the poohihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11445691463105808647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-23422966448274991082009-02-08T14:43:00.000-08:002009-02-08T14:43:00.000-08:00funny before i even read your words i immediately ...funny before i even read your words i immediately personified the picture of the two flowers as love. :) great idea!floretahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18220834824793299258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-18770346739125682562009-02-08T13:38:00.000-08:002009-02-08T13:38:00.000-08:00fledging poet and pam thank you so!fledging poet and pam thank you so!Winnie the poohihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11445691463105808647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-31940430811392111102009-02-08T12:46:00.000-08:002009-02-08T12:46:00.000-08:00So much longing and so little control in this poem...So much longing and so little control in this poem. Very nicely written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-47560743737358937432009-02-08T11:25:00.000-08:002009-02-08T11:25:00.000-08:00Wind, the hero and the villainGorgeous! Such simpl...<I>Wind, the hero and the villain</I><BR/><BR/>Gorgeous! Such simple words, but such a poignant message.Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-86286435417602355452009-02-08T10:46:00.000-08:002009-02-08T10:46:00.000-08:00kite horse thank you for the kind words...Wind lov...kite horse thank you for the kind words...<BR/><BR/>Wind love .. hmm will wait for other options too .. thank you so much deborah.. you were the only one who responded to my question :D<BR/><BR/>Gautami thank you :)<BR/><BR/>Amias thank you so!Winnie the poohihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11445691463105808647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-16726434620252601642009-02-08T10:15:00.000-08:002009-02-08T10:15:00.000-08:00Simply beautiful ... well put!Simply beautiful ... well put!Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14722413697537828830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-29715373079914581482009-02-08T08:15:00.000-08:002009-02-08T08:15:00.000-08:00Beautifully put!movementBeautifully put!<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/02/movement.html" REL="nofollow">movement</A>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-85632629785445151692009-02-08T07:28:00.000-08:002009-02-08T07:28:00.000-08:00Very nicely done, I love the bittersweet conclusio...Very nicely done, I love the bittersweet conclusion - the two faces of the movement. How about "Windlove"?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-16661325249031432122009-02-08T05:54:00.000-08:002009-02-08T05:54:00.000-08:00utterly original and limpidutterly original and limpidBruce Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12820133295308884414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-47105510521698329522009-02-08T03:03:00.000-08:002009-02-08T03:03:00.000-08:00Jeeves and Sneha thank you :)Jeeves.. I love your ...Jeeves and Sneha thank you :)<BR/><BR/>Jeeves.. I love your poems.. I have you blog rolled :DWinnie the poohihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11445691463105808647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29530673.post-75480667891876727712009-02-08T02:16:00.000-08:002009-02-08T02:16:00.000-08:00havent seen better =D... this was breathtaking rea...havent seen better =D... this was breathtaking reallySnehahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08366471475858317490noreply@blogger.com