An unseen door
slightly open,
Like an inviting snare,
Captivating,
Impulsive and unaware,
I trudge towards the unknown,
An epitasis.
A bird of blue-green plume,
Hums an unknown tune,
Bewitching,
Peeking through the hole,
I disappear,
Lost forever in an illusion,
A foregone conclusion
Prompted here:
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Winnie the Poohi, this is a very nice start for your first time at Poefusion. Welcome. I hope you will come back again soon. Good night.
Beautiful pic.
And very expressive poem.
:)
Well done,
:)
Well written, dear.
:)
And i loved that pic.
:)
nice one da... me loves this...
oh awesome...
did i mention it was awesome??
it was indeed...!! me loves this too...
oh and i loved the pic too...!!
I love the subtle rhyming dispersed throughout. Nice poem!
Ah, very nice!
what a wonderful first friday 5
Michelle thank you! I feel right at home now :D :D
Thank you riversoul, anoop and vinay!
cassandra tumblewords and lissa thank you!!
Wow, I think I really need to get back in touch with the real, inner me. Somehow, I can't relate with your poems these days :| But loved the rhyme scheme!
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