Promises


Deep into the forest
Lies a living dream
Those words that you carved,
A testament of love
Awaits,
A touch of fate,
Or may be,
An autumn leaf
To bring color to its morose life
The cold stone
Lingers on till eternity
Like those broken promises

A prompt by poefusion .. but not really satisfied by it

8 visitors stopped by.:



Usha Pisharody said...

Meena, why aren't you satisfied with this? It's an utterly poignant poem, that rushes into one with the hint of the bittersweet!
It's beautiful! And the picture too, that tells so very very much!

Winnie the poohi said...

Umm coz i feel its not finished :D

triyash said...

liked the core


A testament of love
Awaits,
A touch of fate,
Or may be,
An autumn leaf
To bring color to its morose life

Praveen said...

a passerby is more than satisfied with this poem:)

nickdigital said...

:D Very Sweet !! lemme know when u finish it and u are satisfied .. That ll be a treat to dine :D

Indrajit Ghosal said...

Liked the blog layout, the poem and the pic, not in any particular order though. :p
Well, the poem is lovely..

Thanks for dropping by friend.
Wd try to visit hre again..

Leo said...

what form is this?? or is it random??

whatever it is, its beautiful...!!

vinay.

PS: am really satisfied by it!! :D

Neeraja said...

STORY OF MY LIFE... BROKEN PROMISES! YOU KNOW WHAT/WHOM I'M TALKING ABOUT, DON'T YOU? :)