Liquid skies capricious - titillatingly crimson
Blushing clouds enthralled- at the horizon
When a poem was not written...........
A couple nudged closer somewhere
Enkindled passion rage without any care
Two silhouettes entwined- smitten
Lost in memories unbeknownst
Tethered at the edge , tears glistened
The poem remained unwritten....
P.S: This type of poetry is called nove otto.. came across it at Poefusion . Such poems are of 9 lines with the rhyme scheme as aacbbcddc with each line of 8 syllables :)
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Simply beautiful, especially I liked the last three lines :)
some memories stay unbroken
some problems stay unresolved
some hopes stay undiminished...
the un-phenomena is so fascinating...
sweet !! loved this one :)
d last 2 paras confused me...rnt they a kinda oxymoron???
but a beautiful amalgamation of words...loved d flow!!!
ps: u been awarded on my blog :)
Oh wow! but you know, the poem was written and in your beautiful words too.Really liked this one Winnie:)
Alok! Thank you :)
John! how true! these 'un' words say our life stories.. the stories that r generally hidden :)
Pratsie! thank you :)
Mayz... It was my attempt to capture my mood at "sunset in ulsoor lake" .. the first stanza describes the water.. the second the lovers out there ;)
The last was for my yearning for what was...
Mithe :) Thank you dear.. well it has been written yes... but many 'perfect moments' do go unwritten no?
beautiful yaar...picturesque setting and moving words! :)
Romantic, beautifully visual
well done
Karthik and Gel thank you :)
dropped in again to wish you HAPPY NEW YEAR 2009 and
a new poem is up at my place for "Poetry Train." It's a low pressure type of writer's online group. ANYONE can join. Please consider it. See the preface to my poem about it and the link on my blog. :)
Your write beautiful poetry and would fit right in. Anyone, no matter whether it's his or her first poem ever written is invited to join.
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wOw...liked the new pattern...
will google more facts about nove otto...
And as always the words and expressions are beautiful..
Beautiful.
Simple
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Simply beautiful
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Gel I will soon post there :)And happy new year to you :D
Sid thank you!
Uddy! thank you!
Fascinating!
Got a lot of catching up to do here. Meanwhile...
Do visit here to pick up a something I have for you :)
nove otto??
good form...i'll try it sometime soon, but i find syllable fitting difficult sometimes...! :)
loved the poem a lot...! :)
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