Vanilla Sky

In my own vanilla sky,
I search
Few shades of you

Between the lines,
A hidden meaning

I try to decipher
In this convoluted poem

Jealous green
mingle with neglected dreams
In the nebulous clouds

I hesitate
Through the star studded night
To find you

Prompted at : ABC Wednesday and 3WW

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Anonymous said...

double prompt eh??

well the poem was double fantastic!! and the pic double beautiful!! :)

nicely penned poohi!! :)

Sneha said...

wow... this was really good :D ... although i hate the phrase 'vanilla sky' :P

ThomG said...

I really liked the construction. Very lyrical.

Winnie the poohi said...

Thank you vinay :)

Sneha.. I know pretty cliched :)

ThomG thank you :)

Tumblewords: said...

Nicely done! I particularly like the phrase 'few shades of you'.

Meow said...

Shabdo ka bohot hi sundar taana baana :)( I hope you do understand what I just said).. Beautiful poem & I also truly love the entire feel of your blog..

Blessed Be,

quin browne said...

im' jealous

lissa said...

a sad melancholy daydream maybe? a dreamer with a hesitated heart? maybe I'm reading too much into this, anyway, good take on the combined prompts

angel said...

Very nice.

earthlingorgeous said...

I loved that movie too! Lovely poem!

Happy Holidays!


ChrissyM said...

Double Wow for the picture and the poem. Lovely post.

From the ABC Team thank you for sharing!

paisley said...

me thinks perhaps you should look for a more flavorful piece of sky......

--xh-- said...

confused lines... :|

R and J said...

Great sky if clicking larger...

SkyWatch eye

Indrajit Ghosal said...

In my own vanilla sky,
I search
Few shades of you

Lovely very soothing ...
jealosu green ... that was cute actually...

gautami tripathy said...

Beautiful start..

book of myth or reality?

antigoni said...

Great post!

Anonymous said...

Just one word for this piece of art.. 'Pensive'..

Nice one... seems like there is a dark meaning hidden within those lines.. well, my perspective, maybe..

A'ways Cheers!! Happy holidays..

Fiducia a.k.a Angel

one more believer said...

beautiful reflection of loving another in a vanilla sky...

Winnie the poohi said...

Thank you so much for the response!

I am sorry am late in the response *sigh*

Tumblewords I am glad you liked it

Meow.. I love the phrase blessed be.. very witchy like.. u into wiccan culture kya? I did u\s and thnx for the compliments! keep visiting :)

quin browne jealous of what?

Lissa.. I am myself not sure of it .. it was one of those days :) but yeah melancholy is there for sure :)

Angel earthlingorgeous thank you so much!

chrisy its my pleasure :)

Paisley you are right.. i shud after all sky is so vast .. but sometimes one particular piece of it becomes urs no matter what..

Anoop why do u think its confused? R and J thank you.. i have not clicked it sadly.. but I love sky watching!

Indrajit thank you :)

jealous green and kewt ? lol!

gautami and antigoni thank you for stopping by :)

fiducia and one more believer.. thank you so! :)

Meghna said...

oh wow thats a lovely poem. Made my day!

Anonymous said...

I wish I could write any poetry. Good job with this prompt.

Meow said...

My Dear Winnie,

I am not into the Wicca but yes, it does enthrall me & I picked up the phrase "blessed be" from a blogger friend of mine, just got so stuck to it, simply love it :)

Blessed Be,