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Meena, this is really a nice, tight poem. I like how you've crafted the words. One critical remark, I think it would read better as chameleons, sted the singular. What do you think?
I think you are right :) and I am taking your suggestion! I wish I could fit in "Like a chameleon in panic" but the syllable count will go wrong :)So will take your suggestion :)I used singular to show that I am singular.. i didn't generalize it.. now i will :)
3 words, yet so powerful...meaningful too...! :)
nice one.. n the pic was very apt...
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Meena, this is really a nice, tight poem. I like how you've crafted the words. One critical remark, I think it would read better as chameleons, sted the singular. What do you think?
I think you are right :) and I am taking your suggestion! I wish I could fit in "Like a chameleon in panic" but the syllable count will go wrong :)
So will take your suggestion :)
I used singular to show that I am singular.. i didn't generalize it.. now i will :)
3 words, yet so powerful...
meaningful too...! :)
nice one.. n the pic was very apt...
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