Deception

Labels: - Sunday, January 11, 2009



In life's myriad schemes-
Like chameleons in panic,
Deceptions we create!

Prompted at : 3WW

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Thom Gabrukiewicz said...

Meena, this is really a nice, tight poem. I like how you've crafted the words. One critical remark, I think it would read better as chameleons, sted the singular. What do you think?

4:08 PM
Winnie the poohi said...

I think you are right :) and I am taking your suggestion! I wish I could fit in "Like a chameleon in panic" but the syllable count will go wrong :)

So will take your suggestion :)

I used singular to show that I am singular.. i didn't generalize it.. now i will :)

4:13 PM
Anonymous said...

3 words, yet so powerful...

meaningful too...! :)

11:38 PM
Priyanka Agrawalla said...

nice one.. n the pic was very apt...

2:03 AM

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