A shiver went down my spine,
Cold it was, as stone
and yet,
It raged,
like a fire
fiery and insistent
I knew instantly,
Fate has played a game,
yet again,
I knew,
Things will never be same..
And then,
Illusions were re-made,
Yet again!
Prompted at : Sunday Scribblings
12 visitors stopped by.:
poohi, ur words are so brilliant...!!
loved the ending...
illusions were remade yet again!! :)
wow!!
lovely post! Your words seem to have a magical effect in it.
Nice! I like the hopeful ending.
lovely lines
This is an amazing poem. The words are used perfectly.
Ah, yes! Lovely and more!
That is SO good.I love the way you ended it
encore!!!
Really amazing!
Hi..
Have just started following your blog..I guess this is a gr8 place to come more often..
Nice poems, short and sweet, and yet to deep!
Keep writing buddy!
Nice
very nice
wishes to you Poohi!
mip
Here from Sun. Scribblings (For Dec. 14th prompt). Your poem grabs my interest yet again and again as I read. "Illusions remade" I really like.
very true to life. good job capturing this.
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