Malaise





















Erudite Echoes Faintly 
Fugacious farces sagaciously; 
Sanity sails through
Tactile tablature 

Rabid ramnifications  galvanize
Ghostly Galanty macabre
Malaise mullishly haunts,
Halcyon hours .

Prompted at : Inspire me thursday!

P.S: Trying something new here.. Mostly this might not make much sense. but there is an underlying meaning.. Can you guess ?



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Biju Mathews said...

No idea!! This went right above my head!!

A wild guess: The crow flew through the window and stole the fish :-)

Usha Pisharody said...

Woah! The highly alliterative feel that this gives is one of deep solitude, and thoughts on rampage :)

Way off the mark I guess... but then this is simply going by instinct.

Awesome verbiage :)

Usha Pisharody said...

Uncannily, this is same title with which I finally posted a write on AP, just last night. Lol!

Winnie the poohi said...

Biju :D :D I write like this once in a blue moon and then forget what idea I had in mind :D

Usha.. ah the words are googled out actually the difficult ones atleast..

I was trying to portray the outrage at the "rabid ramifications" of certain individuals...

erm not really sure now on afterthought :D

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

Interesting choice of words. I like it. :-)

!nversed Poignancy! said...

Lovely!

I could actually see a pattern in the write..
Is it something like we have a poetic structure of words in the sequence
AAB
BBC
CCD
DDE
.
.
So on..?

And lol, I thought this was some sort of a competition today with each one wanting to post a poetry on "Malaise" apparently this is my third read with the same title in less than 12 hours!!
Hehe, Loved each of them and the contrast between them.

Lovely!@

Illeen said...

well ner came across a poem of this sort before
The letter of the last word in a line is the starting letter in the next line..wat is it called..some specific style?

n i find the witch cute.. well yea..y not? :D

deepteshpoetry said...

I loved the alliteration and the rise and fall of deep sounds.

Do chk out my new poem too...I left a comment on ur other blog as well.

Leo said...

it went right above my head too! beauty left me breathless!