A blinking dot,
Traverse,
through the white nothingness
A nudge here,
A drop there
A life breathes
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12 visitors stopped by.:
day by day its getting difficult to comprehend your compositions...
u have lot of explaination to give.
ps. wht abt breezer date???
Nice
:)
u r on dear! :D :D
lemme call ya now.. and plan ;)
Vivid, that dot!
You breathe life into the words!!
amusing ....
now read this :
A thoghut,a smile,
amused i am,for what you write...
you want to know what i read here?
i still can not decide....
What to understand,
and what to leave behind ?
emotions flow
with every line
whatever u write,
u write so fine :)
vinay.
i think you might have a different intention in mind while writing this, but i interpreted it differently ... itz fantastic watsoeva :P
hmmm.. i keep guessing what this particular work means... is it a egg, or is it a birth of a baby.. please.. do tell me... i'm breaking my head
=)) Breaking her head is probably the simplest result your poetry has ever caused! :) Not for simple minds like mine, huh?
@uddy where is our breezer date or rather when ??
@sid thnx :)
@ Usha! Thank you :)
@pratsie.. ah thats a lovely impromptu verse... take whatever you can and leave nothing behind :P :P
@sneha.. acc to me.. a poetry shud mean diff things to diff people.. if mine induced to interpret it differently.. then its like i have been successful :) Do tell me about your interpretation!
@aki.. its just a dot.. on the computer screen.. a pixel may be :D
@neeru! You try so hard to find complicated meanings while the answer is so simple :P
hmm.true n true..gud 1
hariyha
www.arenaoflife.blogspot.com
Thank you :)
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