I never noticed




For long you stayed there,
Right in the corner.
I had been amiss,
I never noticed.

You held my burden,
And at times carried me
Unwaveringly
I never noticed

Through winters and rain,
Through happy times ,and pain.
You were, by my side
I never noticed.

And now you are no longer able,
To be right there,
To carry my burden,
With broken legs, oh table!
I certainly notice that!

Prompted at : Inspire me thursday

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Neeraja said...

Ah, I didn't expect this! Quite a twist. Lovely work :)

ANWESA said...

a poem with surprise endings..1 of my favourite genres.luvd it..

Usha Pisharody said...

:) Nice one...

RiverSoul said...

Wow
Untill the last lines, i never realised that its an inanimate object ur speaking of.
:)
:)
Awesome

Mithe said...

really nice-to write such a beautiful piece on something as ordinary as a table speaks volumes of your talent! Loved your blog too. Am blogrolling you:)

soulbrush said...

what wonderful words.

Sharon said...

Beautiful and meaningful poem. We do tend to take things for granted until they are no longer there for us, don't we? Thanks for sharing.

Winnie the poohi said...

Thankyou so much!

neeraja anwesha and usha ma'am thank you so much !

sid mithe and soul brush I am glad you liked it

sharon.. rightly said.. always wanting what is not phenomenon i guess isnt it ?

Leo said...

ummm....ur title reflects my state of mind right now...
i never noticed this...!

and i thought, it was a romantic post at first...

nicely written nevertheless!! :)