Like the paint, peeling off the unopened, long forgotten door
Strained, my nerve endings are aquiver and my fragile heart quite sore,
Waiting for the one who dwelled there for long and doesn't want to any more!
Written for ReadWritePoem
Poetry Sisters and Seven Ways of Looking
1 month ago
7 visitors stopped by.:
I've never seen this form before. I like it! Mysterious!
Its a korean form :) You should try it!
What a beautiful simile you open with. There's a lot of emotion evoked here.
:) Good one meanie!!
liked the last line :)
Erin nave and pratsie thank you :D
Lovely photograph!
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