A beautiful beautiful thing!



In your eyes, I see me
Gloriously alive, Amazingly alluring
This love, rose-tinted mess
A Beautiful, Beautiful Thing!
Rose- tinted mess, this love!
Amazingly alluring, Gloriously alive..
I see me in your eyes..

Prompted at : Naisaiku

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Pretty Me!! said...

I guessed already you will definitely try !! and this one was so sweet :)

Sweet Talking Guy.. said...

Beautiful words! I love the way you re-arranged the second stanza...

Winnie the poohi said...

yay!!

>:D< >:D<

ofcourse! who knows me better ?

Wendy Naisa said...

So glad that you wrote something for the Week One prompt - this is amazingly beautiful!

Thank you for taking The NaisaiKu.. Challenge!

Cursed♪♫ said...

Hi!!
Nice one! You have a lovely blog :)

Winnie the poohi said...

Wendy thank you so

Cursed? may I know your name please.. dont wanna call you cursed.. umm thank you!

Sepiru Chris said...

I like the approach with swapping phrases in the lines; clever.

Stan Ski said...

Works like this as well!

Amias said...

You reversed the lines and it still read find ... this is good, very good.

Leo said...

Super dear. Romantic.

Whats a naisaku btw? Could u elaborate, so i can try someday?

spacedlaw said...

Sweet!

Neeru said...

:)