Dazed with confusion, I,
Addle you with questions
Nettled by your intense stare, I
Desist from
Encroaching your space.
Love however, binds us with
Invisible cords. you,
Overlook my transgressions and
Naively greet me with a smile
Prompted at : Acrostic only
Dandelion
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To think, a weed can do all that .. and more. I enjoyed this Winnie ... I am going to read some more.
Magnificent you write,
Every time you just amaze,
Each word a gem in its own,
No way to forget it only,
Always write like this dear.
I loved it!!1N chk out my new poem on V-Daay 2.Hope u remember me...
EEEEEEEEEEEEEE, Hi POOHEEES
owee ! terrific command of Angreji you have. My Angreji is very chaupat Poohee, and please don't ask any one to rate what comes out of your delicate mind. Its yours and its dear to you and its precious. And we enjoy it.
Very strong poem and great word choices.
Its perhaps one of the most difficult thing to script out emotions when options are constricted and acrostics are one such.
But, this is so neatly and beautifully scripted with vibrant and very appropriate choice of locutions..
Great!
I am loving this place.. and all the poetry here... Couldnt stop myself from following this one.. loved it.. :)
Nicely written!!
Delightful as always !! You rock Meanie with your fabulous choice of words and leave your readers spellbound !!!
:) I'll never be able to look at coffee stains AND conversations AND dandelions quite the same way again.
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