Is It Worth The Trouble?




Candid confessions!
A miscalculated risk-
My impulsive honesty
Is It Worth The Trouble?
My impulsive honesty
A miscalculated risk-
Candid confessions!

Prompted at: 3WW

Not really satisfied by this.. may be will re touch it later :)

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mayz said...

i didnt quite kno wat Naisaiku is till i read ur posts...vy well written

floreta said...

i am always too honest. both honesty and lies are risk :(

anthonynorth said...

Ah, honesty. Sometimes, too much can be bad for you.

Pretty Me!! said...

a real confession :)

Daily Panic said...

confessions are always candid.
good post

Winnie the poohi said...

Thank you Mayz :)

Floreta true! same here!

Anthony yes.. too much of anything is not good! but honesty has this veneer of goodness.. i wonder how good is it!

Pratsie! yesh yesh!

Daily panic :) welcome to my blog

Tumblewords: said...

Good job! I haven't tried this form you - you are good at it.

Wendy Naisa said...

I like the way you worked the three words here!

The NaisaiKu.. Challenge!

Lucy said...

Good for the soul!

pjd said...

An interesting form. I like the miscalculated risk--that's the crux of the poem for me. I'm not sure I get the question in the middle.

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

quite creative! :-)

ThomG said...

These are quite hard to pull of well, and I think you've hit the mark you were aiming for. I wouldn't change a thing.

Amias said...

I like this style ... some I have read but didn't get it ... but this one is good. I am going to try it as soon as I read all the details on how to do it.

Leo said...

well written... another new form?

Neeru said...

Fantastic!