Crumpled sheets portray
Failed nerves; they conceal-
my illicit desire
Prompted at : 3WW
And also submitted at : Monday poetic train
Desire...
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13 visitors stopped by.:
The final line is where this takes off. Any chance of changing form and lengthening this?
Shall try :)
Thank you susan for visiting !
Speaks volumes, you wrapped it up nicely!
great metaphor!
Nicely done - a slice of life...
I'm with Susan; I'd love for this to go on for several more stanzas. It's just so well-crafted.
interesting !!
Grin!
dancing verses
Not any more! :) Great byte!
Scary Story
So much with so few words!
Sweet talking guy thank you :)
floreta.. tumblewords.. thank you so!
Tomg i shall certainly try to ..
pratsie thnx :)
Meera welcome to my blog :)
Feldging poet thanx :D
usha :)
super!
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