Like chakor I search you
In dead of the night; After long
The specter visits
Prompted at: One single impression
P.S: Chakor is a bird that is supposed to track the moon all night :)
Moon
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21 visitors stopped by.:
Thanks for including what a chakor is. Haunting little poem that makes me wish to stay up and spend the night with this bird.
To find the other or merely a spectre? Haunting, indeed.
haunted and haunting. It lingers with me still.
This is haunting! Phew!!!
not much -- or maybe even too much to love in a sliver of a newish moon -- it is as you so nicely hint a specter of itself
Pam welcome to my blog :) I know what you mean.. i love the moony moony night!
Sandy.. to find moon :)
endurogirl.. i am glad that it affected u so :)
Sweet talking guy :D yesh it is.. but then so is moon no ?
kitehorse yesh! You got it right :D
glad u found the moon.
sad we do ....
he isnt as pretty as he looks...has his own flaws
chakor, i didnt know that.
im torn between feeling sad for the bird and feeling glad for it.
ahh.. interesting :-)
a phantom of the night!!
I never knew of a 'chakor' before reading your poem...I like the idea of a bird that tracks the moon. I think maybe I was one of these birds in a previous life... :~)
Very well done...thank you for sharing.
Thanks for sharing this. I had no idea but the thought will resonate with me for a long time. Nicely done!
Thought provoking!
LovleY!
You know I went right to my dictionary, when I couldn't find it, I had to goggle .. and there it was ... now that I understand, this is good.
You taught me a new word and gave me chills.
That pesky moon is hard to find when it's past full and waning. Good poem!
lovely
Surreal. Yet the beauty remains!
:) Lovely!
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