3WW-Naisaiku

Labels: , - Friday, February 27, 2009



Persistent dreams interfere with callous reality.
Tumultous thoughts embroil in the inroads of my mind
Life, a will o' wisp!
The inroads of my mind embroil in tumultous thoughts.
Callous reality interfere with persistent dreams.

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Anonymous said...

i LOVED this... specially the first and last lines.. :)

2:29 AM
Tumblewords: said...

Well done - I like the way you've incorporated the prompt words into this form -

10:12 AM
Thom Gabrukiewicz said...

I really liked how you took the first line and recast its meaning in the last. Nice.

10:13 AM
Winnie the poohi said...

Ah me liked the first line too pratsie :)

Tumblewords and ThomG Am humbled thank you :)

11:36 AM
Anonymous said...

i loved it too! like prats!

11:56 PM
Neeru Iyer said...

:D This one's cool.

7:38 AM

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