Persistent dreams interfere with callous reality.
Tumultous thoughts embroil in the inroads of my mind
Life, a will o' wisp!
The inroads of my mind embroil in tumultous thoughts.
Callous reality interfere with persistent dreams.
Poetry Sisters and Seven Ways of Looking
1 month ago
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i LOVED this... specially the first and last lines.. :)
Well done - I like the way you've incorporated the prompt words into this form -
I really liked how you took the first line and recast its meaning in the last. Nice.
Ah me liked the first line too pratsie :)
Tumblewords and ThomG Am humbled thank you :)
i loved it too! like prats!
:D This one's cool.
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